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雅思圖表作文經(jīng)典范文講解

2012-06-29

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摘要:

  一篇優(yōu)秀的圖標作文的評判標準為有三個:目的明確、主題鮮明、結(jié)構(gòu)配置得當。拿到一篇圖表作文后,烤鴨在心里應(yīng)該時刻謹記該類作文核心原則主要有2個,即Summarize & Make comparisons(寫作目的、最重要的信息&歸類)。

  圖表作文可采用分段模式撰寫,即:2+X(2代表開篇和結(jié)尾;X代表分類的結(jié)果和圖形的數(shù)量)。在圖表作文行文撰寫過程中,考生有3點值得注意:

  第一,開門見山。開篇即明確說明圖表傳達給你的主題意思。此處,可借助時間變化和數(shù)量變化兩個要素引入。

  第二,段落主體,細節(jié)分類、并給出一些支持結(jié)論的證據(jù)或過程??忌鷳?yīng)看圖表中的變化項:哪些對象上升,哪些對象下降,哪些不變,還可以看比較:哪個對象是“最好王者”。此處有些可以借鑒的撰寫規(guī)則,如:名詞照抄,動詞和抽象名詞替換,時間和地點不變,突出“指代”等等。

  第三,文章結(jié)尾,結(jié)合目的,明確的給出圖表中最為重要的信息。

  范文舉例:Cambridge 8 ? Test 1

  The chart compares the proportions of overgrazing, over-cultivation, deforestation and others. The table compares the percentages of overgrazing, over-cultivation and deforestation in North America, Europe and Oceania during 1990 ? 2000. 文章的開篇與提示句不同之處在于:你是在看過圖表后產(chǎn)生的具體的描述。

  結(jié)尾:

  Overall, it is clear that overgrazing, over-cultivation and deforestation are main causes of global land degradation, and that the primary causes of land degradation in the three areas were different : North America (Over-cultivation), Europe (Deforestation), and Oceania (Overgrazing), and Europe had the most seriously affected land of the three countries.

  中間段:- 分段,每段的主題句如何支持最后的結(jié)論 X= 2

  第一段:第一句:最大值, while第二句:接近的值歸類. However, 其余的不重要的值

  The most primary cause of land degradation in the world is over-grazing, accounting for 35%, while other two main causes are over-cultivation and deforestation, occupying 28% and 30% respectively. The reminder only takes up 7%.

  23% of land in Europe was degraded, which was the most serious, and 9.8% of land degradation was caused by deforestation, as well as 7.7% (over-cultivation) and 5.5% (overgrazing). 13% of land in Oceania was spoiled, and 11.3% of land spoiled was because of over-grazing, while 5% of land was degraded in North America, and 3.3% of the land degradation was subject to over-cultivation.

  A complete composition

  The chart compares the proportions of overgrazing, over-cultivation, deforestation and others. The table compares the percentages of overgrazing, over-cultivation and deforestation in North America, Europe and Oceania during 1990 ? 2000. 文章的開篇與提示句不同之處在于:你是在看過圖表后產(chǎn)生的具體的描述。

  The most primary cause of land degradation in the world is over-grazing, accounting for 35%, while other two main causes are over-cultivation and deforestation, occupying 28% and 30% respectively. The reminder only takes up 7%.

  23% of land in Europe was degraded, which was the most serious, and 9.8% of land degradation was caused by deforestation, as well as 7.7% (over-cultivation) and 5.5% (overgrazing). 13% of land in Oceania was spoiled, and 11.3% of land spoiled was because of over-grazing, while 5% of land was degraded in North America, and 3.3% of the land degradation was subject to over-cultivation.

  Overall, it is clear that overgrazing, over-cultivation and deforestation are main causes of global land degradation, and that the primary causes of land degradation in the three areas were different : North America (Over-cultivation), Europe (Deforestation), and Oceania (Overgrazing), and Europe had the most seriously affected land of the three countries.

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