1、用詞不當(dāng)

　　學(xué)生們寫(xiě)的作文里或多或少都會(huì)有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯?wèn)題，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯(cuò)誤是不能犯的。

　　In the show，if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly，they will get five hundreds thousand U。S。 dollars as a prize。

　　problems應(yīng)改為questions

　　2、拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤

　　這里的拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤不是指在考試時(shí)候的誤打，而是本身對(duì)詞匯拼寫(xiě)記憶的錯(cuò)誤。

　　In conclusion，issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one，requiring subjective judgement，consequently，there are no easy or certain answers。

　　judgement應(yīng)改為judgment

　　3、亂用大詞

　　First of all，children can earn money from their jobs，although there isn’t too much，but they will keep their salary gingerliness。

　　這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問(wèn)題：

　　1)該作文題目是講學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做兼職，因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙;

　　2)although和but是不能連用的;

　　3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;

　　4、表達(dá)中式

　　The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion，it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people，teachers are a kind of vocation。

　　該句的表達(dá)過(guò)于中式化。

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