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托福寫作如何開篇?

2018-09-27

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小編:白麗 356
摘要:

  托福寫作關(guān)鍵的一大步驟是審題,由于審題直接關(guān)系到了整個(gè)文章思路的確定,同時(shí)審題是不是準(zhǔn)確最直接的體現(xiàn)便在文章的開篇段。所以托福寫作要如何去開頭呢?環(huán)球教育小編就為大家介紹了托福寫作如何開篇?

  究竟托福寫作如何開篇?通常而言托福寫作首段的寫作能夠分為兩大步驟:

  一是使用用簡潔明了的句子對(duì)原題目的意思進(jìn)行同義替換;

  二是提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

  這兩大步驟細(xì)化后還能概括為四句話:

  首句,采用同義替換的方式對(duì)原題目的意思做更改,肯定是“形變神不變”;

  第二句,對(duì)題目的意思做解釋

  第三句,提出自己的觀點(diǎn);

  第四句,再概括自己所提出觀點(diǎn)的理由,引起下文。

  下面具體使用了一些客戶經(jīng)常犯的毛病題目進(jìn)行解釋這個(gè)“兩大步,四個(gè)句子”的具體運(yùn)用方法。

  案例:誤解原意思

  Do you agree or disagree: Because people arebusy with doing so many things, they can do few thingswell?

  Original:

  Some people may hold the view that they are able to do things welleven if they are busy with doing so many things simultaneously or during agiven period. Although plausible at the first glance, Idisagree with the statement. Depending on my own personal experience andpersonality, I firmly maintain that people can do fewthings well when they are busy with doing so many things. My arguments of thisopinion are listed as follows.

  解析:

  文章首句話并非是對(duì)原題目意思做解釋,應(yīng)該是采用采取了以及原意思相反的做法來進(jìn)行題目詮釋;后面一句表明自己對(duì)誤解題目的觀點(diǎn);到了第三句話對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行近一步的解釋;第四句一個(gè)過渡性的句子。開篇內(nèi)容安排倒是很好,但是作者犯了誤解原題目意思的錯(cuò)誤導(dǎo)致后面整個(gè)文字都做了無用功。

  改后:

  When people are engaged in a large extent of work simultaneously, they will not be able to perform all of them perfectly. Justimagine how terrible it will be: too many jobs need tobe done by the same person in a given time. Once such a picture appears in mymind, I feel dizzy. To me, itis impossible to do everything well with the limited energy and many othersfactors .Therefore , I agree with the statement toomany things to be done at the same time cause few to be well done . The reasonsare as follow.

  Revised:

  首句話對(duì)于原題目意思進(jìn)行了很好的詮釋;第二、三句話又去進(jìn)一步解釋原題目;第四句話提出自己的觀點(diǎn);第五句話過渡性句子引起下文。

  以上老師為大家介紹了托福寫作如何開篇的內(nèi)容,如果你想考托福并且希望獲得一個(gè)好成績,希望你能夠認(rèn)真的閱讀文中的內(nèi)容,制定適合自身的學(xué)習(xí)備考計(jì)劃,我們相信考托福不是什么難事。在這里祝福所有托??忌寄芸汲鲎约盒膬x的成績!


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