當(dāng)一道作文題站在你面前的時(shí)候，是不是瞬間變身天秤座了?覺(jué)得agree也有道理，disagree也有道理，但是無(wú)論選哪邊都不好辦。而且，正在選擇綜合癥的你，這時(shí)候已經(jīng)把剛才的那7個(gè)詞忘干凈了，真的一點(diǎn)殘留都沒(méi)有。

　　溫馨提示，那7個(gè)詞是development，details, organisation, cohesion, sentence structure, word choice, variety.

　　從Development開(kāi)始，在這里并非發(fā)展的意思，而是拓展，讓你的思路展開(kāi)。也就是說(shuō)，假如我們選擇了立場(chǎng)，disagree, 咱不覺(jué)得有錢就是成功，那么必須說(shuō)說(shuō) 除了錢以外還有什么是成功的衡量標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。這時(shí)候就需要開(kāi)腦洞地思考。其實(shí)不難想出來(lái)，還有名譽(yù)，知識(shí)，甚至，愛(ài)，或者 大家的尊重。是不是瞬間覺(jué)得更有話說(shuō)了?從中挑選兩三個(gè)吧，每個(gè)都是一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，都能寫(xiě)成一段。

　　這里有一個(gè)黃金原則，給觀點(diǎn)，必給解釋;給解釋，必給例子。觀點(diǎn)+解釋+例子是優(yōu)秀論述的典型結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　這就是detail發(fā)揮作用的地方。比如，寫(xiě)“尊重”的那一段：I believe that being respected by coworkers indicates success. (觀點(diǎn))+Without that respect, money means little. (解釋)+For example, I once did some work for a top attorney in a law firm. He made a very good salary, but he wasn’t a nice man. No one ever did work for him willingly. He ordered everyone around, and we didn’t respect him. In contrast, however, I had a wonderful band director in high school. He had to take extra jobs just to make enough money to support his family. However, his students had great respect for him and always listened to what he said. As a result, we were a very good band. (例子) + As a result, we were a very good band. In my opinion, my band director was more successful than the attorney was.(最好像這樣說(shuō)完例子再溫馨提示一下剛才自己的觀點(diǎn))。

　　于是我們挑3個(gè)分觀點(diǎn)，名譽(yù)，尊重，和知識(shí)，足夠?qū)懗梢黄俣嘧值奈恼隆ｍ槺氵@也自然地構(gòu)成了organisation，每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一段，再加首尾段就剛好是5個(gè)段落，一篇好文。

　　比如：

　　Many people believe that a large income equals success.(說(shuō)趨勢(shì)) I believe, however, that success is more than how much money you make.(大白話說(shuō)清楚我的觀點(diǎn)) Some of those measures of success include fame, respect, and knowledge.(拓展解釋)

　　Most people assume that famous people are rich people, but that isn’t always true.(分觀點(diǎn)一) For example, some day I would like to be a famous researcher. Few scientists are rich by today’s standards.(例子細(xì)節(jié)) Still I will feel myself to be successful if I am well-known.(解釋個(gè)人情感) Additionally, there are many famous humanitarians who are not rich. Mother Theresa was one. Certainly, no one would say she was not successful.(例子細(xì)節(jié))

　　I also believe that being respected by coworkers indicates success(分觀點(diǎn)二). Without that respect, money means little. (解釋)For example, I once did some work for a top attorney in a law firm. He made a very good salary, but he wasn’t a nice man. No one ever did work for him willingly. He ordered everyone around, and we didn’t respect him.(例子細(xì)節(jié)) In contrast, however, I had a wonderful band director in high school. He had to take extra jobs just to make enough money to support his family. However, his students had great respect for him and always listened to what he said. As a result, we were a very good band.(還是例子細(xì)節(jié)) In my opinion, my band director was more successful than the attorney was.(重申強(qiáng)調(diào)觀點(diǎn))

　　Finally, I think one of the most important indicators of success is knowledge. (分觀點(diǎn)三)Wealthy people don’t know all the answers.(解釋) For example, in the movie Good Will Hunting, the only person who could solve some complex problems was the janitor. He knew a lot, and decided what he wanted to do with that knowledge rather than just think about money. (例子細(xì)節(jié))In my opinion, he was extremely successful.(重申強(qiáng)調(diào)觀點(diǎn))

　　When we think of history, there are few people that we remember simply because they were rich.(重申強(qiáng)調(diào)觀點(diǎn)) Overall, we remember people who did something with their lives - they were influential in politics, or contributed to science or art or religion.(總結(jié)) If history is the ultimate judge of success, then money surely isn’t everything.(升華)

　　這一番分析其實(shí)已經(jīng)講了那7個(gè)詞中的4個(gè)(development，details, organisation, cohesion)，這4個(gè)詞的基礎(chǔ)是母語(yǔ)的組織能力，也就是中學(xué)語(yǔ)文作文的思維能力。若要說(shuō)區(qū)別，那就是西方的語(yǔ)文表達(dá)更傾向于直白和具象?？傮w來(lái)說(shuō)，這種語(yǔ)言拓展和組織能力，對(duì)于中學(xué)語(yǔ)文尚可的考生來(lái)說(shuō)，是可以通過(guò)多看幾篇官方文章和自己練習(xí)就能在兩周內(nèi)學(xué)會(huì)的。

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