9月3日作文真題寫作思路分析

 來源：環(huán)球教育網(wǎng) www.ielts.com.cn 2005-9-5

    Topic: 9月3日A類大作文真題

    Children who are brought up in families which have not great amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree？

    寫作思路：

    文章著重討論貧富不同家庭出身的孩子在成年以后解決問題能力也不同，普通家庭出身的孩子此方面能力更強(qiáng)。

    態(tài)度：同意
    論點(diǎn)一：Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals.

    論據(jù)：對(duì)待玩具的不同---more responsible，對(duì)待學(xué)習(xí)的不同-----more independent，幫助家庭工作---more responsible and independent 

    論點(diǎn)二：Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life.
    論據(jù)：普通人家出身孩子對(duì)待改變?nèi)松膽B(tài)度和出身富家孩子的對(duì)比

    讓步段論點(diǎn)：But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals.

    結(jié)論：總結(jié)之前的提到的主要觀點(diǎn) 

    總結(jié)：這篇文章需要考生會(huì)設(shè)身處地考慮出身不同的孩子長(zhǎng)大后如何用不同的方式態(tài)度對(duì)待生活中問題。在考試或者練習(xí)寫作的時(shí)候盡量學(xué)會(huì)使用生活中普通的例子說明支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。

    重點(diǎn)詞匯：

    factor
    critical
    empirically
    adulthood
    well-off
    household
    problem-solving 
    fancy
    babysit
    upbringing
    affluent
    donate
    over-protected
    harsh
    entrepreneurs
    accomplish
    privilege
    cope with