托福寫(xiě)作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)比較高，在語(yǔ)言上的考察點(diǎn)也是非常多而雜，所以大家對(duì)于托福考試在語(yǔ)言上的考察一定要有足夠的重視，尤其是一些常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤，大家更要注意予以避免。造句要做到準(zhǔn)確、多樣以及高分表達(dá)。下面小編和大家分享一下托福寫(xiě)作如何表達(dá)才更有高級(jí)感？更能獲得考官的青睞？一起來(lái)看。

　　I 準(zhǔn)確的句子表達(dá)

　　1. 句型分析

　　英語(yǔ)的句型包括以下幾種，簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句、并列句、并列復(fù)合句等。在托福寫(xiě)作中，一般使用復(fù)合句，輔以并列句和并列復(fù)合句，當(dāng)然肯定要有簡(jiǎn)單句，做到長(zhǎng)短句相結(jié)合。下面摘抄幾個(gè)句子給大家認(rèn)識(shí)并分析一下復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。

　　a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

　　這句話是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，由even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。

　　b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

　　這句話中是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。with介詞結(jié)構(gòu)中，有一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句對(duì)result進(jìn)行解釋說(shuō)明。

　　c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

　　上句話是一個(gè)并列復(fù)雜句。and 連接了兩個(gè)句子，是一個(gè)并列句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。

　　d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.

　　這句話同樣是并列復(fù)雜句。由and連接兩個(gè)句子，成為并列句，再一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。

　　2. 有問(wèn)題的句子的列舉

　　考生寫(xiě)的句子容易出現(xiàn)三個(gè)問(wèn)題：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接連句，三是句子連接不正確。

　　1). 破碎句

　　所謂破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是沒(méi)有謂語(yǔ)(或者說(shuō)謂語(yǔ)是動(dòng)詞的非謂語(yǔ)形式，如分詞)，或者是從句單獨(dú)成句。

　　破碎句：She singing alone. (無(wú)謂語(yǔ)，singing是現(xiàn)在分詞)

　　正確句：She is singing alone.

　　破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句單獨(dú)成句)

　　正確句：He did not come because he was sick.

　　2).接連句

　　所謂接連據(jù)，就是兩個(gè)句子直接連在一起，既未使用連詞，也未使用正確的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。

　　接連句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　正確句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　正確句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　3).句子連接不正確

　　所謂句子連接不正確，就是兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子之間以逗號(hào)連接，這是不合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法的。正確的做法是以連詞、分號(hào)、冒號(hào)、句號(hào)等連接兩個(gè)句子。