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托福寫作如何精彩收尾

2016-04-07

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摘要:一個(gè)好的作文結(jié)尾也會(huì)給文章增色不少,給人留下深刻的印象。今天我們就來看看托福寫作結(jié)尾段如何寫的簡(jiǎn)潔精彩。

  一個(gè)好的作文結(jié)尾也會(huì)給文章增色不少,給人留下深刻的印象。今天我們就來看看托福寫作結(jié)尾段如何寫的簡(jiǎn)潔精彩。

  1.總結(jié)式(重述前文)

  把在前文中的觀點(diǎn)在結(jié)尾段進(jìn)行重述,但是不能出現(xiàn)與開頭段或者題目中的單詞重復(fù)。

  E.g.4

  *In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour。

  What do you think are the cause of this?

  What solutions can you suggest?

  Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole。

  把solutions進(jìn)行的簡(jiǎn)單的再次描寫--父母、好的托兒所、政府的資金扶助。

  *Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

  I think, therefore, that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public.Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action.Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste。

  重述上文的內(nèi)容,由政府采取措施—提高意識(shí)(children &;; adult)

  --具體措施(提高價(jià)格、循環(huán)利用、罰款)

  2.兩分式

  把文章涉及到的主題人或者物分成兩種,對(duì)其進(jìn)行分別的說明。

  E.g.5

  *In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.Some people regard this ad completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.What are your opinions on this?

  Nevertheless, in better economic circumstances, few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work.If learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value in children's development。

  對(duì)于有錢的家庭而言,家長(zhǎng)很少送小孩去做童工;如果是為了錢或者其他,可做兼職。

  *Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others, however, think that change is always a good thing。

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion。

  In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes。

  如果是人們自己的選擇那么改變是一件好的事情,但如果是被強(qiáng)加于身,改變則不會(huì)帶來任何可喜的效果。

  3.折中式

  很難判斷

  In conclusion, I do not think其中到底誰占據(jù)主導(dǎo)地位,或者什么是最重要的,兩者是缺一不可的,需共同存在。

  E.g.6

  Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life。

  That either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects.How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life。

  兩者是缺一不可的,天賦和后天培養(yǎng)同等重要。

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